(集合)高考英语满分作文15篇
在平凡的学习、工作、生活中,大家都尝试过写作文吧,作文要求篇章结构完整,一定要避免无结尾作文的出现。写起作文来就毫无头绪?以下是小编收集整理的高考英语满分作文,希望对大家有所帮助。
高考英语满分作文1
假设你是李华,加拿大一所学校将于今年暑假组织学生来你校访问。其间,Andy Smith将借住你家。请你代表全家写信给Andy,他的'到来,并告知有关事宜。信的要点
1. 上午:学校活动2.下午:游览市区3. 晚上:看电视,玩游戏,聊天
注意:1. 词数:100左右2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯3. 参考词汇:安排arrange
Dear Andy,
I’m so glad that you’ll be here with me and my family for the summer holiday. I’m writing to express our warm welcome and introduce the activities during your stay here.
In the morning ,some activities at school will be arranged. You’ll visit our classrooms, reading rooms, labs, and so on. We’ll take this opportunity to exchange our views, talking about school life, and so on.
In the afternoon, you can tour around the city. And I’ll act as your tour guide. Our city has changed a lot and takes on a new look. You can see what is our city like with your own eyes.
At night , we can watch TV, play games and talk about what we’re interested in. I’m sure you’ll enjoy yourself. I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours sincerely,
Li hua
[名师点评]
行文自然流畅,文章要点齐全,意思表达真切。详略得当,重点突出。从语言使用的角度来说,不但使用了一些生动的动词,准确的名词,同时为了使串联自然,又使用了时间状语为连接词,将文章按照时间顺序叙述完整。
高考英语满分作文2
假设你是卜曼宜,你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机,因有质量问题,要求该公司更换。请根据下列要点,用英文写一封电子邮件。
要点:1. 问题:手机不响铃,不能发短信;该产品已售完,无法更换;型号新,无配件,无法维修。2. 要求:公司应尽快予以更换。
注意:1. 词数为100左右;
2. 参考词汇:配件—— spare part;
3. 电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入你所写词数);
4.已给出的电子邮件的开头和结尾不得抄入答题卡。
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr.20xx at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R. China. Ten days after that, it didn’t ring and send short messages. Then I took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a new one. I had no choice but to go to the repairman. To my disappointment ,he said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. I was so desperate on hearing that for I can not wait that long. Therefore, I have to require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.
Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely yours,
Bu Manyi
内容要点齐全,语言丰富,结构合理,如头两句说明了购买手机后发现故障的情况,中间部分说明了无法维修而必须让公司更换手机的原委,最后明确提出自己的要求,明白流畅,将题目所提出的要点全部表达清楚,较好的`完成了任务。全文以一般过去时为基调,结合主动语态与被动语态,并使用了so, but, therefore 等连接词,使文章结构完整严密。固定短语,如be sold out ,at least, had no choice but to go, to my disappointment, on hearing that 等的使用,使文章的语言显得地道而精炼。
积累卡片英汉互译
好词1. disappointment n.失望 2.desperate adj.绝望的 3. consideration n.体谅
好句To my disappointment ,he said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.
令我失望的是,他说因为在中国是新款手机,所以没有配件来修理。
评析:复杂句的组织; to my disappointment, 常用短语。 2
高考英语满分作文3
Nowadays, more and more advertisements appear on newspapers,broadcasts, magazines as well as streets. People have different views on advertisements.
Some people think advertisements can help people to have a wide choice of goods and they help consumers know the goods and businessmen better. The consumers can gain not only knowledge of goods but also artistic enjoyment.
Contrary to those people, many others think advertisements are very unpleasant. Consumers are often cheated by the false advertisement on which consumers always waste a great deal of time. What is more, consumers feel annoyed to be interrupted when they are watching TV play. So advertisements should be limited.
But whether you like it or not, advertisements have become a part of our life.
现在越来越多的广告出现在报纸、广播、杂志甚至街头,人们对此有不同的看法。
一些人认为广告能拓宽人们对货物的.选择,使消费者更好地了解货物和商家。消费者不仅能够获得商品知识,也能得到艺术享受。
相反,另外一些人认为广告很令人讨厌。消费者经常被虚假广告欺骗,而且人们在这些广告上浪费了大量的时间。更有甚者,消费者觉得看电视剧时插播广告特让人心烦。因此,广告应当受到限制。
不管你喜不喜欢广告,它已经成为我们生活的一部分。
高考英语满分作文4
WTO is an international organization that works to guarantee fair trade between many nations. It was established on January 1st, !1995, taking the place of Multilateral Trade Organization. Now China has entered into WTO and bee a member of it. In the future it will be e,nvenient for our country to develop trade relations with many other nations; And any dispute will be handled constructively under the same rules.
I think that China's entry into WTO will have a lot of long-term social and economic benefits. It can enhance economic growth aad will have much influence on people's ideology.
We, middle school students, are the master of our country in the future. We should be diligent in our studies. It will better prepare us to enter the international arena in which petition is being increasingly intense. Please remember that we can do nothing for our country without knowledge.
高考英语满分作文5
Sally was a teacher who taught some students full of problems. The students didn’t follow the school rules. Therefore, she made the rules for them. Later they made great progress.
In our class, some students don’t work hard and often fight with each other. I will tell them some stories about hard-working people. I will make a study plan to encourage them to study hard. I put up some sayings on the walls to remind them to do so. I will explain to them that studying hard is very important. They aren’t allowed to fight at school. In this way, students have a good habit. Most of the students follow the school rules and study hard. They will respect teachers and other classmates. They will have good manners and confidence. Later they will get better grades.
萨莉是一位教一些有问题学生的老师。这些学生不遵守校规。因此,她为他们制定规则。之后,他们取得了很大的.进步。
在我们班上,有些学生不努力学习,经常互相打架。我会跟他们讲一些有关勤劳人们的故事。我将制定一个学习计划来鼓励他们努力学习。我把一些谚语张贴在墙上来提醒他们这样做。我将会向他们解释努力学习是非常重要的。他们不允许在学校里打架。通过这种方式,学生们有了一个好习惯。大多数学生遵守校规和努力学习。他们会尊重老师和其他同学。他们会有好的举止和自信。以后,他们会取得更好的成绩。
高考英语满分作文6
酒店介绍 Hotel introduction
Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.Our hotel stands 500 meters away from the entrance to Baishan Mountain. It has 20 afaigle rooms and 15 double rooms, all with hot showers. A single room is 100 yuan and a double room 150 yuan for one night. You are advised to book in advance. The hotel serves three meals a day and there are Chinese food and western food for you to choose from. You can also enjoy yourself at the cafe drinking tea or coffee in the evening. We also have a swimming pool, www.enun.cnwhich is open all day and free of charge.
欢迎来到白山山酒店白山山酒店已经开业。我们酒店是距离白山入口处500米。它有20个afaigle人间和15个双人间,有热水淋浴。单人房是100元,一间双人房150元一晚。建议您提前预订。酒店提供一日三餐,有中餐和西餐供您选择。你也可以享受自己的`咖啡馆在晚上喝茶或咖啡。我们也有一个游泳池,www.enun.cnwhich一整天都是开放和免费的。
All are welcome!
欢迎您的光临!
高考英语满分作文7
高考英语满分作文范文全国卷:夏令营summer camp
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I’ve learned on the Internet that your summer camp, which is going to be held in Singapore, is round the corner. I am really interested in it.
I, who am active and enjoy various activities, hop to take part in it very much. I know the ability of communication is of the importance and I can speak English quite fluently. In addition, in your camp, there are so many students from different countries. Therefore, I can communicate with the students from different parts of the world. Not only can I introduce China to them, but I can know more about their countries as well.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Regards,
Li Hua
女士先生你好
我叫李华,来自中国的一个高中生,我在网上看到你们将要在新加坡举行的夏令营活动,并且非常感兴趣。
我非常享受参与各种活动,这次的.活动也非常想参加。我知道沟通能力非常重要,我可以讲一口很流利的英文。此外,在夏令营中我可以跟来自不同国家的学生交流,不仅可以了解到世界不同地区的文化,不仅可以向他们展示中国,同时也可以从他们那里学到更多。
期待您的答复。
问候
李华
高考英语满分作文8
I Want to Smile There are many advantages of smiling. It can not only make us happy, but also please others. If we smile at life, life will smile on us in return. So I want to smile at all whenever and wherever possible, First, I would like to smile at my parents because they have given me life and take all the trouble to bring me up.
They arrange almost everything for me. With their help, I have made great progress. I would like to say “Thank you” to them with a smile. Then my smile should go to myself, for only in this way can I gain more confidence in smiling my troubles away and live a better life.
In a word, let's greet every day with a smile. Tomorrow is another day.
高考英语满分作文9
【作文真题】2009年全国Ⅰ卷
[true tohttps://p.9136.com/0pposition] 2009 Volume I of China
兔子是历届小动物运动会的短跑冠军,可是不会游泳。一次兔子被狼追到河边,差点被抓住。动物管理局为了小动物的全面发展,将小兔子送进游泳培训班,同班的还有小狗、小龟和小松鼠等。小狗、小龟学会游泳,又多了一种本领,心里很高兴;小兔子和小松鼠花了好长时间都没学会,很苦恼。培训班教练野鸭说:“我两条腿都能游,你们四条腿还不能游?成功的90%来自汗水。加油!呷呷”
Rabbit is the champion of sprinting in the past small animal games, but it can't swim. Once the rabbit was chased to the river by the wolf and almost caught. In order to develop the small animals in an all-round way, the Animal Management Bureau sent the small rabbits to the swimming training class. The same class also included dogs, turtles and squirrels. The little dog and the little turtle learned to swim, and they had another skill. They were very happy. The little rabbit and the little squirrel didn't learn it for a long time, and they were very distressed. "I can swim on two legs, but you can't swim on four legs," said the trainer? 90% of success comes from sweat. Come on. Quack
评论家青蛙大发感慨:“兔子擅长的是奔跑!为什么只是针对弱点训练而不发展特长呢?”思想家仙鹤说:“生存需要的本领不止一种呀!兔子学不了游泳就学打洞,松鼠学不了游泳就学爬树嘛”
The critic frog greatly sighed: "what the rabbit is good at is running! Why train for weaknesses instead of developing strengths? " The thinker Xianhe said: "there is more than one ability to survive! If a rabbit can't learn to swim, it will learn to make holes. If a squirrel can't learn to swim, it will learn to climb trees. "
要求选准角度,明确立意,自选文体,自拟标题;不要脱离材料内容及含意的范围作文,不套作,不得抄袭。
It is required to select the right angle, clear intention, choose the style and draw up the title by yourself; do not write out of the scope of material content and meaning, do not copy or copy.
【考点解析】
[analysis of examination sites]
2009年全国卷Ⅰ高考作文题继续延续了近三年高考作文出题的思路,是材料命意作文。今年的高考作文题出的不错,既贴近我们每个学生的实际,又和我们国家社会的实际息息相关,命题的开放性和含蓄性都确保了学生们有话可说,同时又有一定的区分度。立意是否全面深刻,情感是否真挚感人,材料是否条理准确,文体是否明确,结构是否明晰,语言是否有文采,这些都是可以将学生的作文等级区分出来的。
In 2009, the composition of the national Volume I college entrance examination continued the idea of the composition of the college entrance examination in the past three years, which is the composition of material life and meaning. This year's college entrance examination composition questions are very good, not only close to the reality of each of our students, but also closely related to the reality of our country and society. The openness and implicitness of the proposition ensure that students have something to say, and at the same time have a certain degree of differentiation. Whether the idea is comprehensive and profound, whether the emotion is sincere and moving, whether the materials are organized and accurate, whether the style is clear, whether the structure is clear, whether the language has literary talent, all these can distinguish the composition grades of students.
从审题上说,我们首先可以区分两个角度:
In terms of examination, we can first distinguish two perspectives:
兔子小狗小龟和小松鼠这是一类,培训班教练野鸭评论家青蛙思想家仙鹤是一类。
Rabbits, dogs, turtles and squirrels are the same kind. Training class coach, duck critic, frog thinker, crane is the same kind.
兔子小狗小龟和小松鼠象征正在成长的生命个体,具体可以说是我们青少年。
Rabbits, dogs, turtles and squirrels symbolize the growing life of individuals, specifically our teenagers.
培训班教练野鸭评论家青蛙思想家仙鹤象征社会,学校,家庭等
Training class coach wild duck critic frog thinker crane symbolizes society, school, family, etc
培训班教练野鸭说:“我两条腿都能游,你们四条腿还不能游?成功的90%来自汗水。加油!是看到了受教育者努力后成功的可能性,强调后天的努力。很显然他没有看到,先天条件的制约,没有准确的给受教育者定位,没有因材施教。
"I can swim on two legs, but you can't swim on four legs," said the trainer? 90% of success comes from sweat. Come on. It is to see the possibility of success after the efforts of the educated, emphasizing the efforts of the day after tomorrow. It is obvious that he did not see the constraints of congenital conditions, did not accurately position the educated, did not teach students in accordance with their aptitude.
评论家青蛙大发感慨:“兔子擅长的是奔跑!为什么只是针对弱点训练而不发展特长呢?”强调的是扬长避短,看到了优胜劣汰的关键。但很显然,他没有意识到,生活中“一招鲜”有时是解决不了问题的,看法也不全面。
The critic frog greatly sighed: "what the rabbit is good at is running! Why train for weaknesses instead of developing strengths? " What is emphasized is to develop strengths and avoid weaknesses, and to see the key to survival of the fittest. But obviously, he didn't realize that "one trick" in life sometimes can't solve the problem and his views are not comprehensive.
思想家仙鹤说:“生存需要的本领不止一种呀!兔子学不了游泳就学打洞,松鼠学不了游泳就学爬树嘛。”能够比较全面的看问题,看到了受教育者先天条件的制约,不盲目的模仿,不回避努力的因素,同时强调了兔子广泛的学习,多掌握适合自己的生存本领,生存需要的本领不止一种呀,条条大路通罗马。既强调了奔跑的生存本领,同时,又要多创造发现掌握适合自己的本领。
The thinker Xianhe said: "there is more than one ability to survive! If a rabbit can't learn to swim, it will learn to make holes. If a squirrel can't learn to swim, it will learn to climb trees. " To be able to see the problem in a more comprehensive way, to see the constraints of the innate conditions of the educated, not to blindly imitate, not to avoid the factors of hard work, and to emphasize the extensive learning of rabbits, to master more skills for their own survival, there are more than one skills needed for survival, all roads lead to Rome. It not only emphasizes the survival ability of running, but also the ability of creating, finding and mastering.
通过以上的分析,我们可以明白,你可以站在社会,学校,家庭这个角度谈如何培养年轻人,如何既发挥受教育者的长处,同时又要多了解发现,孩子的生理特点个性特点,帮助孩子培养更多的适合自己的生存发展的技能,因材施教,作智慧的引路人。
Through the above analysis, we can understand that you can stand in the perspective of society, school and family to talk about how to cultivate young people, how to give full play to the strengths of the educated, and at the same time, learn more about the physiological characteristics and personality characteristics of children, help children develop more skills suitable for their own survival and development, teach students in accordance with their aptitude, and be a wise guide.
你也可以站在孩子自身角度来谈,作为新世纪的年青人,我们首先要知道自己最擅长的地方在哪里,也就是自知,然后充分的发挥这种优势,同时你又要了解这个社会,和你之外的其他人,也就是知人,然后寻找自己的潜力空间,加以培养,所谓知人者智,自知者明,作扼住自己命运咽喉的'人。
You can also talk about it from the perspective of children themselves. As young people in the new century, we first need to know where we are best at, that is, self-knowledge, and then give full play to this advantage. At the same time, you need to understand this society and other people besides you, that is, people who know each other, and then find their own potential space to cultivate. The so-called people who know each other are intelligent and self-knowledge Ming, as the throat of his own destiny.
总之,审题要全面,立意要周到深刻,从文体上看写记叙文,议论文,散文等文体应该都可以出彩,但文体必须明晰,结构必须清晰,不能写成四不像作文,从材料上看古今中外都有的谈,比如李白,苏轼,柳永,宋徽宗比尔盖茨赵本山奥运冠军村官金融危机等等,材料关键是要用的准确,扣题要准,能不能将真情实感融入材料中,能不能将材料细节处理好,能不能将材料中叙述,议论,抒情处理好都是能否完成好材料写作的关键。当然语言是否清通而且有文采,打动人,行文中不出现错别字都涉及到一个高中学生作文的基本功。要在高考作文这样的舞台上取得好成绩,和平时的努力是绝对分不开的。
In a word, the examination should be comprehensive, the intention should be thoughtful and profound, the writing of narrative, argumentative paper, prose and other styles should be brilliant in terms of style, but the style must be clear, the structure must be clear, and it can't be written into a four unlike composition. From the perspective of materials, there are talks at all times and in all countries, such as Li Bai, Su Shi, Liu Yong, song Huizong Bill Gates, Zhao Benshan, Olympic champion village official financial crisis and so on The key to the material is to use it accurately, to deduct the topic accurately, to integrate the true feelings into the material, to deal with the details of the material, to narrate, discuss and express the feelings in the material. Of course, whether the language is clear, elegant and moving, and whether there is no typography in the writing involves the basic skills of a senior high school student's composition. To achieve good results on the stage of college entrance examination composition, peacetime efforts are absolutely inseparable.
【满分佳作】
[excellent works with full marks]
因材施教,发展自我
Teach students according to their aptitude and develop themselves
“因材施教”这是一个大家普遍接受的思想。成功需要汗水需要付出,但更需要对学习主体客观的分析与了解,扬长补短,发挥自己的优势,这样我们才能更好地发展自我,实现人生价值。
"Teaching students in accordance with their aptitude" is a generally accepted idea. Success needs hard work, but it needs more objective analysis and understanding of the learning subject to develop our strengths and make up for our weaknesses, so that we can better develop ourselves and realize the value of life.
兔子是短跑冠军不会游泳,这是由它先天条件决定的。而鸭子教练却逼着兔子、松鼠学游泳,功夫费了不少,但成效却不大!自己却还不明原因地而嚷嚷“成功的90%来自汗水。加油!加油!”这是一个多么可悲的例子,试想,如果那只兔子不但没有学会游泳,反而把跑步的本领也给忘了,那又该怎么办呢?
The rabbit is a champion sprinter and can't swim, which is determined by its innate conditions. But the duck coach forces the rabbit and squirrel to learn to swim. It takes a lot of effort, but the effect is not good! But I don't know why I yelled, "90% of success comes from sweat. Come on. Come on! " What a sad example. Imagine that if the rabbit didn't learn how to swim, but forgot how to run?
有一篇文章曾写道:“不是任何竹子都能做成笛子,太嫩的竹子质地过于松软,无法吹出悠扬的笛声来。但他们不是没有用了,它们还可以发挥自己柔性强的特点,还用做编竹席的材料!”倘若非要嫩竹做笛子,那想必是费力不讨好,别说像“此夜曲中闻折柳,何人不起故园情”那样勾起客居者的思想(乡)之情,恐怕是自己自娱自乐也显它声音太艰涩难听了吧!发挥自己的优势,弥补自己的不足,因材施教,辩证客观地看待人和物,而不是一个模板育人办事,这样才能突出每个人的个性,使其成为自己领域中的“爱因斯坦”、“毕加索”,而不是一个碌碌无为的庸人!
One article once wrote: "not every bamboo can be made into a flute. The texture of the bamboo is too soft to make a melodious flute sound. But they are not useless, they can also play their own flexible characteristics, but also used as materials for weaving bamboo mat! " If you have to make bamboo flutes, it must be hard work, not to please. Don't mention that "in this Nocturne, when you hear the broken willows, who can't remember the feeling of hometown", which arouses the feelings of the visitors' thoughts (countryside). I'm afraid that it's hard to hear its voice when you amuse yourself! Give full play to their own advantages, make up for their own shortcomings, teach students according to their aptitude, treat people and things dialectically and objectively, instead of a template to educate people and handle affairs, so as to highlight everyone's personality and make them become "Einstein" and "Picasso" in their field, rather than a mediocre mediocre!
“因材施教”,发展个性才能更好地实现自己的价值。客观地分析我们的潜能,我们才能实现飞跃!最近一段时间,人们关注的焦点之一就是是否文理分科。我想:作为一个学生当然要德、智、体全面发展,这是我们美好的愿望。但实际上我们每个人的先天条件不同,个人爱好不同,目标和愿望不同,因此很难实行一个模板的教育方式。让热爱文学、醉心于诗词歌赋的文学少年整天沉浸在物理、化学艰涩难懂的公式中,让精于严密推理的明日科学家整天哼吟着散发着发散性思维气息的散文长诗,这是多么难以想象!就像非得让陈景润写抒情诗,让李白研究数学公式一样,最后只能一心期望,终归要破灭!
Only by teaching students according to their aptitude and developing their personality can we realize our value better. Objective analysis of our potential, we can achieve a leap! Recently, one of the focuses of people's attention is whether the division of Arts and Sciences. I think: as a student, of course, we should develop morally, intellectually and physically, which is our good wish. But in fact, each of us has different innate conditions, personal hobbies, goals and aspirations, so it is difficult to implement a template of education. Let the literary youth who love literature and are absorbed in poetry, song and Fu immerse themselves in the difficult formula of physics and chemistry all day long, let the tomorrow scientists who are proficient in rigorous reasoning hum the prose long poem with divergent thinking breath all day long, this is unimaginable! Just as Chen Jingrun had to write Lyric Poems and Li Bai had to study mathematical formulas, at last he could only hope for nothing but to be disillusioned!
发挥自己的优势,展现自己的个性。“因材施教”,让每一个人的潜能都得到充分发挥,扬长避短让我们都成为自己世界的“爱因斯坦”。
Give full play to your advantages and show your personality. "Teaching students in accordance with their aptitude" will give full play to everyone's potential and make us become "Einstein" of our own world.
高考英语满分作文10
假设你是下图的李华。请根据图画所提供的信息,写一篇英语作文,描述昨天晚上邻居看足球赛影响你学习的情况,并描写你随后与邻居交涉的过程(如:你向邻居提出要求,对方向你表示歉意等。)
注意:1. 词数:80—120 可以编写对话或其它叙述方式描写你与邻居的交涉过程
About 9 o‘clock last night, I was doing my homework. Suddenly I heard my neighbor shouting and laughing loudly. He was watching a football game on TV. I couldn‘t go on studying and became impatient. I covered my ears, trying to keep the noises out, but failed. So I had to go my neighbor.
I knocked at his door and said," Good evening, Mr. Yang! Could you please turn down your TV a bit? I am doing my homework.‘
“Oh, I‘m really sorry to have disturbed you. We‘ll do as you say.” My neighbor said politely.
“Thank you very much..” I said and went back to continue my study.
[名师点评]
这篇文章从整体上来看,内容完整,要点齐全。在准确领悟题意的基础上,用平实的语言,将文章娓娓道来,连贯而流畅。句式搭配长短结合。文章对对话的.描写,很生动,让人有种身临其境的感觉。
高考英语满分作文11
a grandmother and a little girl whose face was sprinkled with bright red freckles spent the day at the zoo.
the children were waiting in line to get their cheeks painted by a local artist who was decorating them with tiger paws.
"you've got so many freckles, there's no place to paint!" a boy in the line cried.
embarrassed, the little girl dropped her head. her grandmother knelt down next to her. "i love your freckles," she said.
"not me," the girl replied.
"well, when i was a little girl i always wanted freckles" she said, tracing her finger across the child's cheek. "freckles are beautiful!"
the girl looked up. "really?" "of course," said the grandmother. "why, just name me one thing that's prettier than freckles."
the little girl peered into the old woman's smiling face. "wrinkles," she answered softly.
祖母和一个小女孩的脸上撒上鲜红的雀斑在动物园度过了一天。
孩子们在排队等候他们的脸颊上画了一位当地的艺术装饰用老虎爪子。
“你脸上这么多雀斑,有没地方画了!“一个男孩在哭了。
不好意思,小女孩把她的.头。她的祖母跪在她旁边。“我喜欢你的雀斑,”她说。
“不是我,”小女孩回答说。
“嗯,当我还是个小女孩的时候我总想长这些雀斑呢”她说,跟踪她抚摸着男孩的脸颊。“雀斑很漂亮!”
女孩抬起头。“真的吗?“当然,”祖母说。“为什么,看我身上有什么比雀斑还漂亮。”
小女孩凝视着老妇人的笑脸。“皱纹,”她轻声回答。
高考英语满分作文12
Parents everywhere praise their kids. Jenn Berman, author of The A to Z Guide to Raising Happy and Confident Kids, says, “We’ve gone to the opposite extreme of a few decades ago when parents tended to be more strict.” By giving kids a lot of praise, parents think they’re building their children’s confidence, when, in fact, it may be just the opposite. Too much praise can backfire and, when given in a way that’s insincere, make kids afraid to try new things or take a risk for fear of not being able to stay on top where their parents’ praise has put them.
Still, don’t go too far in the other direction. Not giving enough praise can be just as damaging as giving too much. Kids will feel like they’re not good enough or that you don’t care and, as a result, may see no point in trying hard for their accomplishments.
So what is the right amount of praise? Experts say that the quality of praise is more important than the quantity. If praise is sincere and focused on the effort not the outcome, you can give it as often as your child does something that deserves a verbal reward. “We should especially recognize our children’s efforts to push themselves and work hard to achieve a goal,” says Donahue, author of Parenting Without Fear: Letting Go of Worry and Focusing onWhat Really Matters. “One thing to remember is that it’s the process not the end product that matters.”
Your son may not be the best basketball player on his team. But if he’s out there every day and playing hard, you should praise his effort regardless of whether his team wins or loses. Praising the effort and not the outcome can also mean recognizing your child when she has worked hard to clean the yard, cook dinner, or finish a book report. But whatever it is, praise should be given on a case-by-case basis and be proportionate(相称的) to the amount of effort your child has put into it.
【参考答案】
Parents tend to go to extremes when it comes to praising their kids. (要点一) Yet, both too much and too little praise can be equally damaging. (要点二) When giving praise, parents should be sincere and concentrate on the process instead of the result. (要点三) Similarly, they ought to give praise for how much effort their kids have invested in the work they’re involved in. (要点四)
【写作指导】
完成一篇概要写作,需要经过三个步骤,
1. 读懂原文,抓住段落主题句。在阅读过程中,需要准确把握文章的段落大意,学会剔除非重要信息,弄清楚不同体裁的'文章的内部逻辑关系以及文章的篇章结构。
2. 组织语言,转换表达。在找到主题句明确全文中心的基础上,组织好语言,注重语言表达的独立性和准确性以及高级性,不全盘照抄原文句子,尽量用自己的语言转换表达,同时要注意篇幅的比例安排,用较多的文字去表达重要的内容。
3. 通读全文,逻辑连贯。要牢记各段落要点之间的逻辑关系和自然衔接,用恰当的关联词去连贯全文。
高考英语满分作文13
in your spoken english class, your teacher shows you the following picture. you are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.
what an interesting picture! a western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of noodles. he is holding two forks the same way as we chinese hold chopsticks. he is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot. at first glance, i think it’s a bit funny, for we chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating no
odles. the man in the picture is trying to copy us. obviously he is doing it the hard way. maybe using one fork will do a better job, in my opinion, we don’t need to copy others’ ways of thinking. sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.
高考英语满分作文14
Doing sport builds up our body strength and reduces diseases.
Though we lead a better life, our health is becoming worse now. So “XXXXXE ONE HOUR A DAY,KEEP XXXXX AWAY" has been raised by the government.
At noon or after school we play ball games, swimming and running. Look!The playground seems smaller because lots of students are playing on it.The school life has become colorful and we are energetic.As a result we study harder and better. The Sunny Sports has brought an exciting change to us. Let’s keep on doing it.
高考英语满分作文15
When talking about the career of being a teacher, a lot of people will speak highly of it, because this career enjoys a good reputation, and the most important thing is having rich extra income. Many teachers gain their income by giving students extracurricular tutoring, which can earn much more than their salary. The news reported that Chinese tutoring market has great potential, because the parents are willing to pay more money on their children’s education. It seems that being a teacher means earning money easily. Actually, a lot of teachers are tired on their work as they need to supervise the students, so even on holiday, most of them choose to take a break and refuse to do the tutoring work. We are easy to be misled by the untrue news, and sometimes even misunderstand the career.
在谈到教师这个职业时,很多人都会表示赞扬,因为这份职业享有不错的声誉,最重要的是有着丰富的额外收入。许多教师通过给学生课外辅导来增加他们的收入,这些收入比他们的.薪水还高。据新闻报道,中国家教市场有着巨大的潜力,因为父母都愿意在孩子的教育上支付更多的钱。看来,当一名教师意味着容易挣钱。实际上,很多老师在他们的工作中都是很累的,即使是在在期中他们也需要监督学生,所以大多数人选择休息,拒绝做辅导工作。我们很容易被一些不真实的新闻误导,有时甚至误解了别人的职业。
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